BEC商务英语(中级)写作模拟试卷177
小作文
1. You are a Project Team Leader. You have had to postpone your next project meeting because some of the members of your team will be abroad on business.
Write a memo of 40-50 words to your project team:
informing them of the postponing and giving the reason
stating a new date and time for the meeting
requesting suggestions for the agenda.
Memorandum
To : the members of the project team Date: 1 March 2011
From: King Clicks, the leader of the project leader
Subject: postpone the next project meeting
I am writing to inform you that the next project meeting will be postponed. Because several team members will be abroad for another project, we will hold our next meeting on 1 August, starting from 9 am. Please let me know if you have any suggestions as to the agenda of the meeting.
解析:
大作文
2.• The staff at your company were recently asked what they thought about working conditions. Your line manager has asked you to write a report summarising their opinions and suggesting possible improvements.
• Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.
• Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.
• Write 120-140 words.
Sample C
Report on satisfaction – level of staff members Introduction
This report aims to show weather our staff members are satisfied with their working conditions or not.
Findings
? The recent meeting shows clearly that our staff is quite satisfied with the working conditions.
Especially, a lot of them have praised our pension scheme and our childcare vouchers.
? Nevertheless, some complained about unflexible working hours, as they have to take care of their children at home.
? Apart from this, the poor condition of some office areas was mentioned. A lot of them are dissatisfied with the dirt on the floors and the old-fashioned computer systems.
? Finally, I would suggest to increase the number of days off, as most members feel quite exausted after 6 months without holiday.
Conclusion
In my opinion, we should try to improve working conditions for this will lead to more productivity in the end.
Band 5
All the content points have been addressed and the target reader would be fully informed. The report is effectively organised, making use of headings and discourse markers. The range of vocabulary and grammar is good, and where errors occur they are minor. The register and format are consistently appropriate.
Sample D
Report on: Staff opinion about working conditions
This report aims to summarise the results of the last staff meeting.
Findings
First, most of the employees are really satisfied with the new smoking policy. But there are also some problems.
Due to the fact that many employees have to care for children they would rather prefer flexible working hours.
Furthermore some office areas are in a poor condition, most important is that a few of them do not have sunlight at their workplace.
There is also a problem with the payment when going on holiday, which is too less for our workers.
Conclusion
In c
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