BEC商务英语（高级）写作模拟试卷185
小作文
1.. The chart below shows the distribution of positive and negative responses given in a market survey about service provision at a leisure centre.
. Using the information from the chart, write a short report about the resuIts of the market survey, describing customer reactions to the services provided.
. Write 120-140 words.
Report on the distribution of responses
The aim of this report is to describe the distribution of positive and negative responses given in a market survey about service provision at a leisure centre.
For the ticket cost, the number of people who were negative is 900, which is almost three times as many as the people responding positively. On the contrary, 950 customers were satisfied with the attitude of staff. Only 300 customers held a negative response.
The booking service was nearly equally evaluated with 650 positive responses and 600 negative responses.
When asked about the parking facilities, 550 customers said something negative about this kind of service, whereas 700 customers responded positively.
解析：内容
BEC高级考试的小作文在内容上要求考生在规定的时间和字数范围内，以简短报告的形式，客观地描述(describing)或比较(comparing)所给图表的数字，表述趋势和走向，做出推断等。因此，行文要求客观、简洁、明快。报告中只反映图表呈现的直观信息即可，不可随意加入自己臆想的内容，否则在对内容评分时会被扣分。
沟通程度
考官在对文章的整体内容进行评分时，着重考查文章的格式(format)和语域(register)。
格式，就是要符合报告的书写规范。语域，就是要符合语言使用的场合或领域。因为第一部分只是小作文，字数要求比较少，可以不采用Introduction，Findings和Conclusion等小标题。以防超出字数。
比较推荐的格式是：
文章标题：Repot about the resuIts of the market survey
第一段：用一句话介绍报告的目的。
第二段：考生既可以将服务种类作为参考，也可以将顾客数量作为参考，不管采取何种参考作为切入点，都应该对每种服务类型的两种回应情况进行描述。建议考生在直接写数据之前采用较为高级的语言表达方式，例如衔接词和倍数表达。
第三段：写结束语。由于这篇报告写的是顾客对于休闲中心市场调查的反映情况，所以结尾可以就顾客的满意程度给出建议。
商务英语写作有正式与非正式文体之分，所以商务英语考试的作文应该采用正式文体，用语正式，语言风格要体现商务特征。小作文部分是正式文体或者中性文体。
文章组织
这个单项主要考查考生组织语言的能力，换言之，就是考查逻辑和排序。如果作文要在文章组织这一项上获得高分。建议考生多采用适当的衔接词(linking words)，保障逻辑稳定、句子顺畅。
语言
语言考查项目，主要集中在语法(grammar)和用词(vocabulary)两个方面。建议考生可以将“数据的描述用一般过去时”作为一种统一标准，因为图表中反映的信息都是对过去的事情进行统计而得出的数据。有的考生容易将图表描述和图画描述弄混而错用一般现在时，切记不要因为粗心而混用两种时态。另外，语法尽量精确，不宜犯单三、单复数、时态、语态之类的简单错误。考生还可以通过善用句型和丰富词汇来展现自己的语言能力。实现高分目标。
值得一提的是，因为小作文部分基本上都是对升降、持平之类走势的描述，所以建议考生在考试前把每种趋势的高级表达都背下来两三个，防止因词汇量不够广而造成重复表达，使文章失色。
大作文
2.. Your company recently sponsored a national event for the first time and your manager has asked you to write a report on this.
. Write your report for your manager, including the following information:
. a brief description of the event
. which aspects of the event were particularly successful and why
. the benefits to the company of sponsoring the event
. what needs to be done before considering further sponsorship.
The aim of this report is to give an overview of the event our company decided to sponsor and present the benefits and the pitfalls.
Introduction to the event
’Computer 2003’ was the fifth edition of an annual event held in Lausanne (Switzerland). Its goal is to present and promote the innovations in the IT field.
Its success
Designed to inform professionals, the event also reached the interest of the public. During the whole week, the guests took park very actively in the meetings, the
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