大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷595
作文
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled My View on Charity. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words following the outline given below:
1．近年来，部分慈善机构或个人受到批评和质疑。
2．出现这种现象的原因。
3．你的看法。
My View on Charity
Charity brings the society power, arouses people’s enthusiasm for life, and helps others to overcome difficulties. However, after several scandals, it has become a trend for the public to criticize and doubt charity organizations or individuals.
It is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse. In the first place, the disordered charity management is the elemental cause of criticism. Why? A large number of charity organizations have not come to realize the problems in their management, budget and raising money. In the second place, the lack of public trust constitutes another major cause. Based on a survey on the Internet, because of some negative cases, a majority of people admit that they are unwilling to donate or help others through charitable activities or organizations.
As a college student, I am firmly convinced that it is exceedingly necessary for the public to be involved in charity. However, we should advocate and encourage organizations to reform charitable activities.
解析：本题已给出题目，即“慈善机构之我见”。若要就此题展开讨论，考生可以从三方面行文：描述不良现象，分析产生这种现象的原因，阐述自己的看法。
第一段：描述目前慈善机构存在的不良现象。
第二段：分析产生这种现象的原因。
第三段：说说你对此现象的看法。
三个动词并列，描述慈善所传递的正能量，起强调作用。
it has become a trend…意为“……已经成为一种趋势”。本句描述目前慈善存在的问题。
总结本段，引起下文。
In the first place意为“第一，首先”，阐述第一个原因。
承上启下，连接巧妙。
A large number of意为“许多的，大量的”。
In the second place阐述第二个原因。
基于调查，文章例证充分。
提出个人观点。
2.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Should Children Start Primary School Early? You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words following the outline given below:
1．陈述现象：目前很多孩子很早就开始上学。
2．有些人认为这不利于孩子的发展，对此现象陈述个人观点。
3．做出总结。
Should Children Start Primary School Early?
In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven. However, because it is more likely that both parents work today, there are few opportunities for children to stay at their own home up to their school age. Instead, they will probably go to a nursery school when they are much younger.
While some people think this may be damaging to a child’s development, or to a child’s relationship with his or her parents. In fact there are many advantages for children to have school experience at a young age. Firstly, a child will learn to interact with a lot of different people. They are generally more confident and independent than children who stay at home with their parents. Another advantage of going to school at an early age is that children develop faster socially. They make friends and learn how to get on well with other children at the same age. This is often not possible at home because they are usually the only child. So overall, I believe that attending school at a young age is beneficial to most children.
解析：本题要求考生撰写一篇有关学生早入学的议论文，文章要求中已经给出了明确的提纲，按照提纲行文即可。
第一段：陈述现象，指出目前很多孩子很早就开始上幼儿园。
第二段：有些人认为这不利于孩子的发展，对此现象陈述个人观点。
第三段：总结自己的看法。
开篇立题，说明正常的入学年龄。
However表转折，进而
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