大学英语六级改革适用（作文）模拟试卷597
作文
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet and Privacy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1．网络几乎已经渗透到人们生活和工作的方方面面，甚至包括我们的一些个人隐私。
2．网络会对个人隐私产生哪些影响。
3．你认为应该如何保护我们在网络上的个人隐私。
The Internet and Privacy
The Internet has penetrated into every aspect of our lives and work.
When working, studying, hunting for jobs, communicating and entertaining, what we can rely on is the Internet that is famous for its convenience. However, at the same time it is inevitably invading our privacy to some degree.
First of all, there’re many websites that require our registering, for which we need to provide much private information, including our names, gender, address, telephone numbers and sometimes even bank account. Besides, our information might be open, stolen or sold due to the poor Internet administration and weak network security, which is of great harm to us.
Taking the above-mentioned into consideration, we must enhance the alertness when using the Internet. First, when we need Internet service, we should always log on those big legal websites. Second, if the service requires important private information, we should think twice before typing in it.
解析：本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第一点指出一种现象，第二点要求分析该现象带来的负面影响，第三点要求说明应该如何防止其负面影响，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述如今网络在人们生活和工作中的重要性，引出网络侵犯隐私这一问题；分析网络对个人隐私所产生的重要影响；说明应该如何保护网络个人隐私。
第一段：描述如今网络在人们生活和工作中的重要地位，引出网络侵犯个人隐私这一问题。
第二段：分析网络对个人隐私所产生的主要影响。
第三段：说明应该如何保护网络个人隐私。
penetrate into意为“渗透到”。
what引导主语从句，增加句式的多样性。rely on意为“依赖”。
be famous for意为“以……著称”。
However笔锋一转，引出了网络侵犯隐私这一问题。
First of all，Besides分条叙述网络对隐私的负面影响，条理清晰。
which引导定语从句，由于for是介词，故置于which之前。
due to意为“由于，因为”。
Taking sth. into consideration意为“将……考虑在内”，现在分词短语作状语。
First，Second分条叙述应该如何保护网络上的个人隐私。
2.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Parents’ Emphasis on Education. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words following the outline given below.
1．目前中国的父母越来越重视孩子的教育，想把一切好的东西都留给孩子。
2．针对这一现象谈谈你的观点并陈述理由。
3．提出解决办法。
Parents’ Emphasis on Education
Nowadays, in China, more and more families have more than one child. Parents are paying more attention to their children than before. With the economic condition becoming better, parents tend to give the best things to their children. They want them to receive the best education and hope they will contribute to our country and society.
However, I think too much care would be harmful to children. For example, parents are willing to have their children sign up for a lot of after-school programs. They think the more skills their children master, the more useful it is for their growth. Even though children already have too much homework to do after school, they still have to take a series of courses such as art class, English class and piano class. The interest-oriented class makes them have less time to relax themselves. They might become shortsighted or depressed.
In a word, even though parents believe their emphasis on education is good for their children, they should evaluate how much pressure their children can endure. The
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